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Staring at walls

June 2, 2010
By IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Blank walls, waiting for
beauty. Tape, putty, tacks; No
awe there. Wait for it.

I write, you in mind.
Long walks, singing in my room.
Picnics at the park.

Scraps of nostalgic
value. Unusual blooms.
A poem for you.

The wall, no longer
blank, white, or bare. Memories
cloak the emptiness

© Quinn B., Lubbock, TX

The author's comments:
I'm not sure if it really counts as A Haiku, it's really four Haikus strung together. But I did really work hard to make every verse as a haiku. I wrote it for my dear friend, Max :)
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IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 3:55 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Awwwww, I think that may just be one of the best comments I've ever gotten :)
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 2:31 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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Sweet. :)

Reminded me of my true love. :)