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July 14, 2010
By avantgarde GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
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I write for the same reason I breathe...because if I didn't I would die. --Isaac Asimov

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Infatuation's
unreciprocated love;
forgetting is hard.

© Shirley Y., Metuchen, NJ

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Inspired by a boy I have a crush on.
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Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 24 2010 at 7:55 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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This articulated the feeling so well. The best compliment I can give you is this: you are an artist of brevity.
KatB14 SILVER said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:13 pm
KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
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I agree with Sky, it sounds so much more than just a crush. But at the time it feels like the biggest thing in the world, and you totally captured that. Great haiku!
sky_is_womb BRONZE said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 12:38 pm
sky_is_womb BRONZE, Moorestown, New Jersey
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i liked how your choice of words made it sound very...advanced, professional. it makes it sound like so much more than just a "stupid teenage crush". very very beautifully written!
amandap PLATINUM said...
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short and sweet and to the point! well done!