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If i could be you and you could be me

December 3, 2010
By Anonymous

Hiding behind hair,
A great wonderful creature,
The face that is yours.

You are so gorgeous,
Like a shimmer on water,
You shine just like sun.

I wish i was you,
So you could see you as me,
Special as can be.

© Anonymous

The author's comments:
someone i have loved for a long time and they cant see it. i wish they were me so they could.
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