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Autumn

January 24, 2011
By Prettyboy BRONZE, Trinidad, Colorado
Prettyboy BRONZE, Trinidad, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you want"


Yellow gold and red
Autumn is the time to fall:
Renewal of life

The author's comments:
this is one of my first haikus.

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PeepLoveR GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 2:21 pm
PeepLoveR GOLD, Weston, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"The past may soon choose your future, and your future, may soon be your past." This a quote I thought of my self.

hey cody this is jeanna. i like this lol

on Feb. 14 2011 at 12:37 am
razberri9 BRONZE, Weston, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
If you want someone who is unpredictable, then stop predicting people. - Unknown

I like how this is one of the few poems on here that is a real haiku. Good job on your beginning efforts at this type. :) I liked it because it's so obviously about nature and fall, and it gives great imagery.