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Tombstones

April 18, 2011
By lmd_4994 GOLD, Union Grove, Alabama
lmd_4994 GOLD, Union Grove, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"May you live every day of your life" - Jonathan Swift


My fingernails stand
On the ends of my fingers
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on Jul. 5 2011 at 10:08 pm
OneProzacADay PLATINUM, State College, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You are the universe expressing itself as human for a little while." -Eckhart Tolle

this is really great poetry but it would be even better if you expanded a little bit. the vagueness is a great aspect of the poem but it could still be vague if you added some more to it. anyway keep writing great stuff! :)