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Ribbons of Thought

June 12, 2011
By SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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The ribbons of thought,
Twining into ideas,
Now become actions.

© Raymond G., Phoenix, AZ

The author's comments:
I got this poem from the thought of how thoughts twist like ribbons and then braid into ideas, and ideas become actions.
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SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 12:08 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thanks!                 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 9:54 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

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I love how you convey such a deep emotion within three sentences of a haiku. AMAZING :)
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 1:45 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thank you!
NorthernWriter said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:03 pm
NorthernWriter, Fargo, North Dakota
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&quot;Only dead fish swim with the stream&quot;

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very unique three lines, it's very complex yet simple and stated so profoundly. keep writing :)
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:28 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thankie kindly!
Peacock said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:47 pm
Peacock, St. George, South Carolina
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Me likes... <3

Complex without seeming so, because of how it all ties together so simply!

SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:09 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thank you!   Please check out my other stuff too!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:09 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thank you!                                                 
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:08 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thanks for the feedback! I know I didn't think I was very good at writing haikus either! 
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:08 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thanks!                                              
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:07 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thank you! That's what I thought when I wrote this!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:07 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thanks!    
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:06 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thank you!  
Vicky11 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 12:04 pm
Vicky11 SILVER, Charlottenlund, Other
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I loved this! I don't know why, but the whole ribbons of thought thing really apealed to me. Great work!
SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 1:11 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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Thank you both for the feedback!
TwasBrilling BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:37 am
TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
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I agree...most haikus dont seem to have a message, or train of thought, but this does!
Megan.J.B said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:36 pm
Megan.J.B, Sault Ste Marie, Other
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&quot;Here&#039;s the real truth. There are eight million people in this city. And those teeming masses exist for the sole purpose of lifting the few exceptional people onto their shoulders. You, me? We&#039;re exceptional.&quot; <br /> - Green Goblin. :)

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really amazing job! I usually hate haikus, but this one is suprisingly nice :)
ohheyyyelli SILVER said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:51 am
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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Haikus are generally so unoriginal but this is amazing! Love it.
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 12:26 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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&quot;Everything&#039;s a triangle.&quot; ~ My mother<br /> <br /> &quot;Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it&#039;s the easiest way to be heard.&quot;

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I love your haikus! This is amazing!!! :)
ArgonElement SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 8:40 am
ArgonElement SILVER, The Woodlands, Texas
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Question Authority.

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It is so hard to write haikus! And even harder to write haikus that make sense! Haha (I am NOT a very good haiku writer) really great. :) Keep it up!