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August 27, 2011
By IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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The sound of windchimes
softly play. I shovel new
borne snow, cleansed is soul.

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A whole new world in time, one of at least two others I have been to, and I didn't even have to step through a wardrobe, or into a pool within a grove.
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IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 6:49 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Thank you, it's called a haiku :)
BriRose2014 SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 5:02 pm
BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
9 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A man reserves his true and deepest love not for the species of woman in whose company he finds himself electrified and enkindled, but for that one in whose company he may feel tenderly drowsy.&quot;<br /> -George Jean Nathan

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it may be a short poem, but it is an amazing one!
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 10:09 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Gracias, Pink :)
ImagineBlueRoses SILVER said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 10:04 pm
ImagineBlueRoses SILVER, Derby, Kansas
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Were it not for music, we might in these days say, the Beautiful is dead.

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I could feel the chill throughout it :) lovely
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 4:21 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Totally, especially when it's raining or snowing, it's like the world's being born anew or like some sort of a veil is melting away.
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2012 at 9:07 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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When I hear windchmes in my neighborhood and the wind is blowing, it seems like almost somethings magical is going to happen. You know? 
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 11:34 am
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Diola lle :) I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
lilmartz PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 30 2011 at 11:53 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
40 articles 5 photos 163 comments

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Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

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Love this! I love the imagery of windchimes and snow...plus, I think the title is really cute. Nice haiku :)
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 4:46 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Haha, we haven't been getting a whole lot of snow either. At least it wasn't muddy this year... Thankee for the comment!
PhoenixCrossing GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:20 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
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Since it's Christmas and there is absolutely no sign of snow in Chicago, this makes me want it even more! I love the fresh aura of this piece. Great job!
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 8 2011 at 4:15 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Le Hannon, Raven :)

I'm sorry I didn't reply to this earlier, I must have missed the email or something. 

IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 8 2011 at 4:14 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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A thousand times thanks, Love.Hate.Passion :)
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Oct. 7 2011 at 10:56 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

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I'm with campeador.I can't write haiku's , but girl , you do it well. Awesome job!
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 5 2011 at 6:47 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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A marvelous poem to return to when one is in need of the refreshing air of a whole new world.
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 7:18 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Thanks, Bright :)
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 2 2011 at 7:03 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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I generally don't like writing haikus (too restrictive) so I admire people who do and do it well. Good job!
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 7:30 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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BTW, people, if you rate, please comment with your reasons for rating as high or low as you did. 
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 4:21 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Awww, hantale (thanks) Heather.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 8:28 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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Girl, you have a way with words. :)
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 5:24 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Thank you very much, Leafy :D