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Understand: A Title Within The Poem And At The End

August 30, 2011
By IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven


Watermelon breath.
Lake-wet hair, canoeing. Stars,
Moon, marshmallow roasts.

Pizza, pool grass.
Sunflowers, dandelions,
Sun-scent skin, smiles.

Four leaf clovers, no
school, bare feet, freedom. Garden.
Jubilant hand-stands.

SUMMER


The author's comments:
It started with the first line, come to mind and doodled whilst, funnily enough, watching a movie set in Autumn.
I had hoped that I could do italics in the poem, to show the title, but I guess capitals will have to do.
(Dragonflies and Damselflies are awesome.)

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on Oct. 6 2011 at 5:37 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

Thanks, Chocomint :) 

It contains all that Summer means to me.


on Oct. 6 2011 at 3:04 pm
ChocoMint SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is like swallowing hot chocolate before it has cooled off. It takes you by surprise at first, but keeps you warm for a long time.&quot; - Anonymous <br /> <br /> &quot;Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss and ends with a tear.&quot; - Anonymous

So cute!!!!  I love summer, too, and that is a perfect description!

on Sep. 16 2011 at 7:12 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Goodness, I do seem to repeat myself very often. Nevertheless, delighted to have reminded you...

 


on Sep. 16 2011 at 6:07 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

Yes, I think you have, and I think I looked it up immediately. I also think that I will go listen to it again right now:)

No, I can't say that I have, though I have been rather meaning to for awhile.


on Sep. 15 2011 at 6:14 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

Perhaps. I'm not sure that it's any particular kind of horse. It's their souls that I care about. Have I asked you if you ever listened to Leonard Cohen's Ballad of the Absent Mare?

Have you read anything by Wilde? I read Picture of Dorian Gray, once. He's an interesting man.


on Sep. 15 2011 at 4:22 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

Oh! Yes, it is, they've made two movies from it, I believe. 

on Sep. 15 2011 at 4:22 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

The mustang, perhaps?

Thank you.

I'm not sure, is it?


on Sep. 15 2011 at 3:47 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

I suppose I must have such an affinity, then! They have a history with humans, one that is sometimes happy and much more often tragic. I am in love with the wild horse, or better yet, the freed horse.

As if the poem itself were the title, brilliant.

Wasn't that a book/short story by Oscar Wilde?


on Sep. 14 2011 at 7:37 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

I am beginning to sense an affinity for horses within you ;)

Thank you, I wanted the reader to come to the meaning, or theme of the poem slowly, for it to be revealed in a title at the end, almost as if the poem itself were the title. 

It was "The Canterville Ghost", the movie made for tv in 1996.


on Sep. 14 2011 at 6:24 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

So pleasant. A playful thing! It rolls around like a mare who finally found freedom in the grassy, high plateau. Summer is smiling at you, Stargirl.

A title within the poem and at the end, such a pure idea. I liked each of the second lines the most, as well as "jubilant hand-stands."

What was the film set in Autumn?