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Falling Awake

November 5, 2011
By RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
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RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
56 articles 12 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes it&#039;s kinda fun to do the impossible.&quot; -Walt Disney<br /> &quot;Go live your dream&quot;-Disney&#039;s Tangled

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Silent knuckles crack,
gasping for air to inhale,
falling into place.

Straight hair starts curling.
The make-up gets smeared and smudged.
Waking up appalled.

© Mary A., Fullerton, CA

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RebeccaJoy DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 8:48 pm
RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
56 articles 12 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes it&#039;s kinda fun to do the impossible.&quot; -Walt Disney<br /> &quot;Go live your dream&quot;-Disney&#039;s Tangled

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thank you. i like the simple stuff sometimes
swiftheart GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 6:06 pm
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?&quot;

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I love it. Short, direct, impressive.