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the note
March 28, 2012
Wrote me a note,
Your eyes say you love me,
They say more than the words.
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This article has 7 comments.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 9:51 am
Maybe the meaning is that our actions speak louder than words---gestures and looks mean more, right? or something along the lines of that?
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 23 2012 at 11:44 pm
I like the message of this poem though it's kinda confusing. I think in the first line, you mean write instead of wrote? I'm not sure. Anyway, I do think too that the first line doesn't seem to fit with the second and third line. But the second and third line both have six syllables each. In a haiku, the second should have 7 and the third should have 5 just like the first. Anyway, keep writing and practice more :)))
hippiechick99 said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 9:50 am
i agree. i usually write long poems to get the massage across. i liked your poem; keep writing!!
dragonfly95 SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 6:10 pm
thanks! thanks for the feed back too :)
eternal_sunshine SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 5:29 pm
I really love the simplicty of this one. It's hard to write so simply without sounding cliche, and I think you did that. Nice job :)
