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Abstinence VS. Sex

July 16, 2013
By Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Society mocks
abstinence; but God detests
all fornicators.

God gives us sacred
purity; society
offers sex. Who's right?

© Sarah A., Morristown, TN

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 27 2016 at 11:03 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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there's truth to every opinion, in one way or another. thanks for sharing your opinion. glad you liked this little rambling.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 27 2016 at 11:01 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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awwwwww!! thanks for the kind words.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 27 2016 at 11:00 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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i'm glad to know i'm not alone debating this internally. thanks for reading :)
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 27 2016 at 10:59 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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yep. tough subject to write about. glad you liked it! ^u^
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 27 2016 at 10:59 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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there's truth to that, i agree. at the end of the day, it's your choice what how you live your life...as long as there's an equal understanding and mutual respect, it's okay... thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 27 2016 at 10:56 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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thank you so much. it's something that a lot of teens think about at one point or another, even if we think we don't think about it.
chessi.maria PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 27 2016 at 11:50 am
chessi.maria PLATINUM, Brooksville, Maine
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I love that someone wrote this poem because it's exactly what I've been thinking. You stated it beautifully!
ambivalent SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2016 at 11:23 pm
ambivalent SILVER, West Bend, Wisconsin
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everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

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I live by "do as thou wilt as long as thou harm none," so, in my opinion, as long as what goes on in your bedroom isn't hurting anyone, it's okay in my book.
cheetahsdontroar SILVER said...
on Mar. 17 2016 at 7:20 pm
cheetahsdontroar SILVER, North Haledon, New Jersey
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The hard truth being told through beautiful poetry. Love it
Poetry101 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2016 at 6:24 pm
Poetry101 BRONZE, Faith, South Dakota
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You don&#039;t need anybody to tell you who you are or what you are. You are what you are !<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~John Lennon

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I know where you are coming from.
Underwater_patricia SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2016 at 9:43 pm
Underwater_patricia SILVER, Brighton, Massachusetts
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Oh that is amazing!
BenitoJuarez98 SILVER said...
on Nov. 9 2015 at 3:52 pm
BenitoJuarez98 SILVER, Grosse Pointe Woods, Michigan
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People are but animals; nothing more, nothing less. Excellent haiku(s).
PragmaticIdealist SILVER said...
on Nov. 1 2015 at 7:44 pm
PragmaticIdealist SILVER, Midlothian, Texas
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Well said! I think it would make quite an interesting debate.
amiller0110 SILVER said...
on Oct. 22 2015 at 11:13 pm
amiller0110 SILVER, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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I think this poem raises a good question. my opinion is everything in moderation. I agree with @Positivity_At_Its_Finest
sophieee27 SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2015 at 5:46 pm
sophieee27 SILVER, New Fairfield, Connecticut
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This is something I've been thinking about for so long but struggle to say to express to others. You are immensley talented for portraying this particular issue in such few words. I love it
addisonclaireee GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2015 at 2:07 am
addisonclaireee GOLD, Carencro, Louisiana
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&quot;The only thing constant in life is change&quot; -Heraclitus

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true love is abstinence, which insures sex isn't all he/she wants.
C. said...
on Jun. 23 2015 at 12:59 am
Every sound screams; each has one voice. So I say, thank you -- keep your faith.
passion_poet19 GOLD said...
on May. 15 2015 at 1:30 pm
passion_poet19 GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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i really like this it tell so much with a short amount of words.
GG_LeBode PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 20 2015 at 4:44 pm
GG_LeBode PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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This is a great way to show the double standard. I love the concept and your elegant word choice. Have you considered writing something similar as a diamond poem?
Positivity_At_Its_Finest DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 26 2015 at 2:11 pm
Positivity_At_Its_Finest DIAMOND, Morrow, Georgia
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Life is a stage, get on it and perform your best act.

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I like this. I feel that it's your choice on whether or not you want to have sex. You have to be smart for yourself, if it doesn't feel right don't do it.