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How Can Strangers Have So Much In Common?
August 7, 2013
My life's story is
In poetry. Yet when I
Write you feel the same.
© Becca W., Greenbrae, CA
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SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 5 2013 at 1:05 pm
Ever so perfectly put. What a spectacular Haiku. And the title, though long, is quite catchy. Pulled me straight to the poem. Very impressive though the same thing a hundred people thought you found the words. :)
PirateCountry DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 15 2013 at 6:31 pm
That was very nice! It is weird how so many different people can think and feel the same way.
I love the concept of this poem. Like your quote said, I can relate with it as well. I hate to bug you with my criticism but I think there might be one or two things that could change in this poem. The "yet" perhaps could work as an "and". "[And] when I write you feel the same." So it feels like you're including the reader. And perhaps a comma after "write" because it somewhat feels like you're saying "write you". I'm not sure if that makes any sense. Other than that, really great poem. I'm sorry for the burden. But I only say it because I really like this.