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January 20, 2010
By ...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell

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Clouds



The sky is all stormy and gray,

The overcast darkens our day,


The sun is not out,

As the clouds are all about,


So what more is there to say?

© Jessie W., Wichita Falls, TX

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...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 3:53 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell

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thanks for the advice! ^^
Healing_Angel SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 6:10 pm
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
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Live for today, not for tomorrow

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Take out the "all about" and just have 'about". This is really good. Limericks are hard to write! I like it!
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 8:25 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell

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right! thanks for the advice!
--LoveHappens-- said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 6:16 pm
--LoveHappens--, Fairfield, Connecticut
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short sweet. but to make it more intense I would love it if you would explain the clouds