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Losing You Forever

January 25, 2010
By Were-Hunter BRONZE, Centre Hall, Pennsylvania
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"How do you know the difference between love and infatuation?" "I don't think there is a difference. I think infatuation is like a garden. If tended and cared for, it grows into a garden. If neglected or abused it dies. The only way to ...have eternal love is to never let your heart forget what it's like to live without it." - Vane Kattalakis, Night Play by Sherrilyn Kenyon

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I love all your little quirks
And all your majoy faults.
So why is it I feel that something horrid lurks?
Why do I feel that I'm losing you forever?

To him - no less!
It's just an awful mess.
You pine and you purr
And I see there is no cure.
I'm afraid that I'm losing you forever/

I can see now there's no stop.
And I can see there's no hope.
For how can there be when my limit's reached the top?
I can see you're unhappy when you mope.
But still my friend, it is hard to know that, I have lost you forever.

© Gina W., Glen Gardner, NJ

The author's comments:
This piece was written when a best friend of mine was having issues with her boyfriend.
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