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Moving On.

March 9, 2010
By shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
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shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
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"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

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There once was a world full of pain,
And no one tried to complain.
Every tear was wiped fast,
Trying to forget the past.
Now everyone faces their rain.

© Hadley B., Marblehead, MA

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CountryGothic GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 2:59 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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This is good, very pretty in the wording.
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 9:58 am
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&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

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amazing! it took my breath away :) i like the idea of "everyone faces their rain". that's really creative and very deep. bravo :) 5 stars all the way. would you please comment on some of my work? :) thanks! keep writing.
justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 24 2010 at 4:11 pm
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That was good, nice ending