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Whats wrong?

September 19, 2010
By Mcswimgirl SILVER, Simsbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Always remember to be happy because you never know who's falling in love with your smile."

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When your smile turns cold
And nothing but silence is told
A heart can drop
The joy just stops
A mind will remain in the past
Everything seems to end too fast

Tell me what is wrong
Don’t let my heart ache for long
You must know that I care
To hurt you is something I wouldn’t even dare

It’s hard to hold on
When you seem to be gone
Is there anything I can do?
Cus baby, I miss you

© Martha V., Morton Grove, IL

The author's comments:
He look mad depressed and i didnt know why..... and so i wrote out my feelings into a poem
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