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October 8, 2010
By jolie42895 BRONZE, Westland, Michigan
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This girl you see,
she lives two lives.
she aches for truth,
but is always told lies.
life with her friends,
is always tremendous,
but when she goes home,
it becomes extremely horrendous.
each and every day,
ends with her crying.
she doesn’t care anymore,
and she’s sick of trying.
on the outside,
she smiles and laughs.
but on the inside,
her sanity is only half.
she’s so sick of hurting.
she wants to be free,
today I realized,
this girl is me…

© Jessica M., Marblehead, MA

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UnwantedNinja GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 4:10 pm
UnwantedNinja GOLD, Pretoria, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them. <br /> Walt Disney

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I love it, it  reminds me of my childhood :)
crazo SILVER said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 1:05 pm
crazo SILVER, Deer Island, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Father to daughter Heart to Heart<br /> No Matter were we are we are never apart&quot; my dad made that for me when i was little=) its not really true though

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i love it reminds me of me i hate my life but love my friends good job its amazing
natashajeanne1021 GOLD said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 11:47 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
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i can also totally relate to this, and i loved reading it!! keep up the good job!! =)
SpringRayyn PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 10:45 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Oh my gosh, this is amazing! I can relate to ya girlie!