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The Stranger Across the Room MAG

By Anonymous

I sat in the airport reading a magazine
My eyes started to wander across the scene
They fell upon a man with dirty clothes and messy hair
He paid no attention to it, he didn’t care

He wore slim-cut jeans and a worn-out hat
He had a tattoo on his arm of a baseball bat
He had a five o’clock shadow you could see from a mile
And it looked like he hadn’t had a haircut in a while

His face was weather-worn and tanned like leather
He must have lived somewhere with pretty rough weather
He had a scar above his left eye
I wondered what happened, how and why

As I boarded my plane I looked back once more
The man was making his way to the store
As my plane left for Egypt to see the tombs
I couldn’t stop thinking of the stranger across the room



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on Oct. 5 2017 at 3:10 pm
KurdiG PLATINUM, Douglasville, Georgia
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I like the way the it flows. Astonishing work!

on Jan. 14 2017 at 3:44 am
sunshineAL BRONZE, Oregon City, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
The best thing about hitting rock bottom is there's only one direction you can go, and that's up.

I could picture the stranger in my mind. Fantastic writing!

Orlivee BRONZE said...
on Oct. 8 2014 at 7:37 am
Orlivee BRONZE, Lagos, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never make someone a priority if they will make you an option.

I like the way it goes, almost like a song...beautiful

on Jul. 14 2013 at 4:46 pm
PirateCountry DIAMOND, Muncie, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."

I'm sure all of us have had a natural curiosity about some random stranger. You did a good job capturing it with words!

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 5:58 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

really well written, but a bit random

on Feb. 19 2012 at 9:53 pm
turnedleftatgreenland BRONZE, Lynbrook, New York
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I really enjoyed this. You have such an organic flow and a great way of creating imagery.

brianna5810 said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 12:59 pm
wow, this poem is amazing.

wilderose121 said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 12:33 pm
very nice. a bit confusing though. 4/roses

on Oct. 10 2011 at 11:09 am
musiccrazy SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Live a life worth living, because God gave you this amazing gift worth giving!" by me (Harley)

WOW! Awesome!

on Sep. 22 2011 at 11:38 am
krissynicole BRONZE, Brownwood, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as youll live forever live as if youll die tomorrow

This was very descriptive and I loved it!!! :D

Becca17 GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2011 at 10:29 am
Becca17 GOLD, Belleville Ontario, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Seven Deadly Sins:<br /> Wealth without work<br /> Pleasure without conscience<br /> Science without humanity<br /> Knowledge without character<br /> Politics without principle<br /> Commerce without morality<br /> Worship without sacrifice.&rdquo; <br /> ― Mahatma Gandhi

love the description :)

on Mar. 4 2011 at 1:21 pm
alekstymura BRONZE, New Britain, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
There is no time, like the present.

i felt the man sitting acrooss the room. very real, good use of imagery. your word choice is good :)

Duckie430 said...
on Feb. 10 2011 at 10:16 am
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger.&quot;

the details in this poem is amazing. good job. :)

MissElliot said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 9:57 pm
MissElliot, Yolo, Kentucky
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This was really awesome!

on Jan. 19 2011 at 1:25 pm

seriously i fell as if i am staring at the stranger when i read the imagery in this poem.

 


Shakespere said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 1:21 pm
This imagery is amazing. I could picture the stranger across the room...

your mom said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 8:13 am
I love this

Rox18 SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 4:59 pm
Rox18 SILVER, Riverside, California
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the imagery in this poem is excellent.you describe it as if im watching a detailed movie. nice job :D

on Sep. 9 2010 at 9:12 pm

wow! the imagery is really good! not sure why isnt posted under limericks though...a limerick is a 5 liner, rhyme scheme aabba with the bb lines being pretty short.

but the freeverse poem is good! i loved it! keep writing!

however, i am confused about why the stranger is so important? most poems arent about nothingness, and this is kinda...pointless? its well written but i dont see what ur trying to accomplish with it

 

 


on Jun. 17 2010 at 3:55 pm
B1ackAnge1 SILVER, Darrington, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Make the best out of the worst situation.

wow i could picture myself there too