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Love is beautiful and painful

December 21, 2010
By JohnnyTheSilverAngel GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I have learned that to be with those I like is enough.&rdquo; By W.W<br /> <br /> &quot;If God gave you the will to start something,You have to have the courage to finish it.&quot; by J.V

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Love so beautiful and so frail,

I wish it come back to me once again.



For the love I've felt and lost

came at such a painful cost.



For I fought and sought

for the woman I thought

would be the one I would love.



Now the love I thought I had

turned out to be something bad.



The lies and deceit you told me

was the way you wanted it to be.



I was hurt and anguished..

and I was full of hatred...

at me...



Love is beautiful and frail

just be careful who you give it to.

© Michelle K., Vancouver, WA

The author's comments:
Well I felt a bit sad when I wrote this.I bet a few people can relate to this.This has nothing to do with me but with what others must feel.
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JohnnyTheSilverAngel GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2011 at 11:37 am
JohnnyTheSilverAngel GOLD, Los Angeles, California
14 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;I have learned that to be with those I like is enough.&rdquo; By W.W<br /> <br /> &quot;If God gave you the will to start something,You have to have the courage to finish it.&quot; by J.V

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Can someone please comment on this poem...I could use some feed back on this.Thank you.