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boderline of destruction

October 25, 2009
By ChrisAMoore PLATINUM, Saint Augustine, Florida
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ChrisAMoore PLATINUM, Saint Augustine, Florida
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Hey guys I have old work on this profile, but I stopped for about two years now. I got back into it now because I found that art and expression is me. So I hope you like the things I post from now on more lol

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You came to me (and)
Said we need to talk
Then suddenly my heart stopped

I began to remember
When you said don’t worry
It’ll last forever

We’ll get through this
No matter what
Then you gave me a kiss

What have I done?
Now I feel like I’m on
The borderline of destruction

I don’t know
But if you do this
I won’t know where to go

It’s like walking through a battlefield
Our life lashes between you eyes

It’s been 2 days now that I’m wondering
Just please, you’re my life

If you say no and it’s over
Then I ill die for you
And I’ll use my last breath
To say I love you

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FlamableFyre DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 4:43 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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I don&#039;t have ambitions or desires. <br /> Being a poet isn&#039;t my ambition, <br /> it&#039;s my way of being alone.<br /> ~ Fernando Pessoa ~

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i know exactly how you feel, great poem, loved it!
twiwrite GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 2:52 pm
twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
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none :P

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oh my gosh iv been there. its kinda chilling to think about that time, even as its happening again.

wonderful poem!
Jack_Walton SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 6:52 pm
Jack_Walton SILVER, Gray, Tennessee
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In a mad world, only the mad are sane. - Akira Kurosawa

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Well, this is good. Not what I was expecting with a title like 'Borderline of Destruction', but I still thought it conveyed the sense of love very well. Great job!
Lonleydandy said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 8:50 pm
SOOOO SWEET!!!!!!!!! And honestly, I only say that when I mean it. It was really cute. Keep writing!!!!
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 4:04 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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Awh!!!!!! That is adorable, i wish some guy loved me as much as you love her, this is so so so good :) keep writing, your good at it