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"How We Were."

December 31, 2009
By perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others.&quot;<br /> -Craig L


I understand that she doesn't want to see me again, that she found somebody else and I cant even begin to pretend that i don't care when I do, can't take my mind off of you, the way you laugh the way you smile,just please pick up the phone and dial, so we could talk for a while.Big house,family dog,maybe bring the world a child. i just need one more chance, to get you back for one more dance.I'm just trying to make sure I'm that guy that's in your future plans.


The author's comments:
I was thinking about break ups that most couples go through and how one of partners, wants the other back

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on May. 19 2010 at 3:59 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

thanks!!! i can't wait

on May. 19 2010 at 2:15 pm
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others.&quot;<br /> -Craig L

i sure will check out some of yours

on May. 10 2010 at 5:12 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

Wow I agree i like this peom too!!! All of yours are very good!!! You should check out some of mine when they get posted!

on May. 8 2010 at 10:36 am
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others.&quot;<br /> -Craig L

thanks for the feedback

on May. 8 2010 at 10:18 am
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If youre a bird, Im a bird.&quot;

This poem is amazing, it kind of the style i like to write.:)

on May. 8 2010 at 10:06 am
perfected_11 SILVER, Cheverly, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Negative thinking limits gods possibilities for us and for others.&quot;<br /> -Craig L

Thanks for the feedback, i will def. check out some of your work

Milo! said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 8:05 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.