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As she burns

August 16, 2011
By Rap_up21 SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
Rap_up21 SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"DON'T TOUCH MY COOOOOKKKIE!!!!!!!!!"


She runs not knowing where she is going,
She cries but no tears are showing,
She laughs without a single sound,
as she burns down,
She is burning to the ground, burning alive, no one can extinguish her fire inside,
She is burning to the ground, burning down, till there is only ashes on the ground,
she cries out to the sky,
yelling out into the distance,
no one can hear her criying,
but still she yells on,
She is burning to the ground, burning alive, no one can extinguish her fire inside,
She is burning to the ground, burning down till there is only ashes on the ground,
as she yells to the sky,
"Bring on the rains of fire",
"I will never change,
I will never expire",
as she cried out thinking it was in vain,
her prayers had been anwsered,
by loves refreshing rain,
she no longer burns to the ground,
lacking in sound,
she knows he will be around,
extinguished is the fire from above.(echo and fade out for last line.)

The author's comments:
This song I had made for my girlfriend, telling the story how she must have felt after breaking up with her previous boyfriend, he dumped her over another girl that just looked prettier.

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on Aug. 30 2011 at 12:27 pm
Rap_up21 SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"DON'T TOUCH MY COOOOOKKKIE!!!!!!!!!"

Awsome thnx for the support.

on Aug. 27 2011 at 10:42 am
Evilgummysattack GOLD, Williamsburg, Michigan
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You really should

on Aug. 24 2011 at 11:25 am
Rap_up21 SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
8 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T TOUCH MY COOOOOKKKIE!!!!!!!!!"

Hoping to make it into a song for my band and publish it.

on Aug. 23 2011 at 8:19 pm
Evilgummysattack GOLD, Williamsburg, Michigan
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This is really good. You're definately talented.