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Thinking Of You

May 23, 2013
By bruisedmemories ELITE, Birdsboro, Pennsylvania
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&quot;When you&#039;re young, you can fly, but we trip on clouds &#039;cause we get too high&quot; -The Band Perry (Song: Don&#039;t Let Me Be Lonely)<br /> &quot;Cause no matter what, you&#039;ll never be alone&quot; -Lady Antebellum (Song: Compass)

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(Verse One)
Sitting here all alone
Thinkin' of you on my own
Wondering where you are
Hoping' your more near than far

(Chorus)
I'm always thinking of you
You make my life complete
Our love is so pure & bitter sweet
To be with you is my only destiny
So please, oh please
Come over here and be with me
Before I drive myself crazy
From thinking of you

(Verse Two)
I wake up late at night
When there is no one in sight
I lie there with you on my mind
As our love starts to be defined

(Chorus)
I'm always thinking of you
You make my life complete
Our love is so pure & bitter sweet
To be with you is my only destiny
So please, oh please
Come over here and be with me
Before I drive myself crazy
From thinking of you

(Verse Three)
Driving in my old car
Looking up at the stars
They shine as bright as your smile
And stretch out for miles & miles

(Chorus)
I'm always thinking of you
You make my life complete
Our love is so pure & bitter sweet
To be with you is my only destiny
So please, oh please
Come over here and be with me
Before I drive myself crazy
From thinking of you

(Bridge)
I love you even more
Than the whole entire world
I just hope you can agree
That we were sincerely meant to be

(Chorus)
I'm always thinking of you
You make my life complete
Our love is so pure & bitter sweet
To be with you is my only destiny
So please, oh please
Come over here and be with me
Before I drive myself crazy
From thinking of you

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

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Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
on Jun. 29 2013 at 8:16 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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This could use a bit of work, but with a spot of love, it would be an amazing song! I love the foundation that you have set down here and just keep on building on those lyrics! :D Have a great day!
Court901 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2013 at 3:00 pm
Court901 BRONZE, Magnolia, Texas
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I really liked the idea of the poem. I do agree with GraphicWriter, though, about the verses and the chorus lengths. But the rhyming is good and so is the word choice.
GraphicWriter DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 24 2013 at 8:47 pm
GraphicWriter DIAMOND, Yuba City, California
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The verses are somewhat shorter than the chorus and it seems that they should be longer than the chorus. The inbetweens are a little weak, like they need supports and you seem to use the chorus' as those supports, but in my opinion they aren't the correct structure that is needed. It's a good start though