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Freeze Me

May 20, 2013
By jhb4life SILVER, Graysville, Alabama
jhb4life SILVER, Graysville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;There is no greater love than this. That a man would lay down his life for his friends&quot;<br /> ~Jesus


Your eyes
Freeze me in time
You've got no idea
What you do to me
And it isn't right
It hurts
More than a thousand stings
From a million bumble bees

The pain
Is surreal
My brain- screaming for a break
But my heart disagrees
I'd die without you
But I'll suffer with you
So, what am I supposed to do
In these times of need
Other than stare in your eyes and freeze

A thousand miles
Will never separate me from your smile
Your eyes- too kind
Always freeze me in time
Freeze me
Freeze me all the time
Freeze me
Freeze me in time
Please look at me for awhile

My mind is racing
Adrenaline kicking in
You know my name
And you touched my hand
All I know
That was more than needed
Do it again
I'll delve deeper
You don't understand

My love for you
Is worth the trouble
The time
The pain
My love for you
Is not evanescent
It's visible
It's noticeable
If you only took the time to see

A thousand miles
Will never separate me from your smile
Your eyes- too kind
Always freeze me in time
Freeze me
Freeze me all the time
Freeze me
Freeze me in time
Please look at me for awhile

I'm doubting you'll ever
See me for me
Instead of someone
To get answers from
What's wrong with this world
And you?
I need to go
Get away from you
So goodbye

But I just can't leave
Or I wouldn't survive
My mind can't wrap around
Not being with you
Even for a little while
So I'm putting up a fight
The fight of my life
And If I fall
Freeze me

A thousand miles
Will never separate me from your smile
Your eyes- too kind
Always freeze me in time
Freeze me
Freeze me all the time
Freeze me
Freeze me in time
Please look at me for awhile

You have the power
To do whatever
To me
Freeze me
Hold me
Anything
It would help
If you took the time
To see me

Turns out persistence pays off
You're mine
And I was worried
Bout nothin
This whole time
But wait
I woke up
From my dream
And you don't care for me at all

A thousand miles
Will never separate me from your smile
Your eyes- too kind
Always freeze me in time
Freeze me
Freeze me all the time
Freeze me
Freeze me in time
Look at me for awhile

I've been so stupid
This whole time
But it's not all my fault
If you never would have led me on
Said my name
Touched my face
I never would have
Wasted my time
On you

It was fun
During the run
But now I'm done
And I'm worn
Why did you lead me on?
To leave me in the middle
Of my pain
Without your eyes
To freeze me in time

A thousand miles
Will never separate me from your smile
Your eyes- too kind
Always freeze me in time
Freeze me
Freeze me all the time
Freeze me
Freeze me in time
Please don't look at me for awhile


The author's comments:
Another one of my works inspired by Demi Lovato, as well as Carrie Underwood. This one as a lot of personal emotion in it as well- enjoy.

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on May. 26 2013 at 11:57 am
FireAndRosePetals BRONZE, Quinton, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
If I can stop one Heart from breaking<br /> I shall not live in vain<br /> If I can ease one Life the Aching<br /> Or cool one Pain<br /> <br /> Or help one fainting Robin<br /> Unto his Nest again<br /> I shall not live in Vain<br /> <br /> ~Emily Dickinson

Awesome! This poem is really relatable too since almost everyone has known someone who made them feel this way. Check out some of my stuff. I have a poem similar to this called 'Oh Selfish Soul, Oh Cursed Heart' about someone I knew that made me freeze in time when I was around them too.