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A look

January 19, 2014
By KshitijKothari SILVER, Pune, Other
KshitijKothari SILVER, Pune, Other
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Only that day dawns to which we are awake.












- Thoreau (Walden and Other writings)


A look is all it takes,
For you to steal my peace.
I try to look away,
But my heart’s in your sieze.


A smile is all it takes,
For you to freeze my beat.
I try to hide my gaze,
But my love’s at your feet.


You astound me , you’ve bound me
To a chain of , desperation
You mesmerise me, hypnotise me
To the verge of, sheer dictation
A tear is all it takes,
For you to make me cry.
I try to fake a smile,
Till your eyes get dry.


A frown is all it takes,
For you to wound my mind.
I try to keep it straight,
But my head is not fine.


You spellbound me, you’ve crowned me
As the king of, your admiration.
You’ve overwhelmed me, just slammed me
On the floor of, sweet affliction.
So now, you know what it takes,
To make, me admire your grace,
Your aspect, and your face,
Are all that I love,
So why wait to fall in love, my love?


The author's comments:
my one and only love made me write this, it is for her

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on Nov. 10 2015 at 1:31 am
KshitijKothari SILVER, Pune, Other
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Only that day dawns to which we are awake.












- Thoreau (Walden and Other writings)

thank you. I appreciate you appreciating its simple rhythm. :)

on Feb. 23 2014 at 12:54 am
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
30 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live

A very sweet and lovely piece of work!
The girl's lucky to have found you! :)

MissRuca GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2014 at 7:24 am
MissRuca GOLD, Pune, Other
15 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Pain is temporary; pride is forever.

 Awesome work :)  The lyrics flow well from verse to verse, and the words have been perfectly placed. It's a really sweet piece.

on Jan. 28 2014 at 8:21 am
KshitijKothari SILVER, Pune, Other
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Only that day dawns to which we are awake.












- Thoreau (Walden and Other writings)

nice song lyrics, crisp , short n entertaining