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October 15, 2009
By Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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&quot;If you have them, flaunt them&quot; -Circle of Friends<br /> <br /> &quot;may the saddest day of the future be no worse then the happiest day of your past&quot; -irish blessing<br /> <br /> If male homosexuals are called &quot;gay,&quot; then female homosexuals should be called &quot;ecstatic.&quot;

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So many secrets I've kept from you
If you knew, I dont know what you would do
I want to share my feelings, I want you to know
But when you find out, Im scared that you'll go
I cant loose you now, please dont leave me
I have to believe we are meant to be
If Im wrong then tell me fast
The longer you wait my heartbreak will be even more vast
I have to get through this, I'll find a way
A way to live jsut one more day
A day to find peace, within and without
And to reconcile with all that I have brought about
Im sorry if I caused you pain
I was just trying to keep from going insane
I love you, and I hope you know
That I will still love you, no matter how far away you go

© Seita O., Palatine, IL

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calephchad BRONZE said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 2:42 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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This poem is so beautiful. This is definitely 5 stars. I love it-->! Keep up the good work. Maybe we can keep each other updated on each other's work. I'd love it if you checked out some of my work and give me some feedback on it. Thanks. Thanks for writing this! I love it!
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 1:33 am
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have them, flaunt them&quot; -Circle of Friends<br /> <br /> &quot;may the saddest day of the future be no worse then the happiest day of your past&quot; -irish blessing<br /> <br /> If male homosexuals are called &quot;gay,&quot; then female homosexuals should be called &quot;ecstatic.&quot;

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you wrote take my heart and break? i dont know how many times i have read that one! it is one of my favorites here, it perfectly describes my best friend and i
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 1:40 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

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beautiful! :) beautifully written, amazing flow, and i love the emotion in this. im experiencing this sort of thing right now, but no way could i have written in down as great as you did :) i love it!! :) BRAVO...5 stars :) check out my work 'take my heart and break it' if you could, i would really love your opinion on it. oh and keep writing! :)