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I'm Alone

May 29, 2010
By Ambo123 BRONZE, Hillsboro, Oregon
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Ambo123 BRONZE, Hillsboro, Oregon
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Two musicians playing together, there is nothing more beautiful.<br /> -John Frusicante

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I thought you'd always be here,
but you let me down.
All I remember is a tear,
and a glimpse of a frown.
The way you made me feel,
like I was almost pretty.
These scars will never heal,
all I'll know is pity.
Why, I'll never understand,
the reason you betrayed me.
We walked hand-in-hand,
and now only a memory.

© Sarah D., Olean, NY

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My boyfriend cheated on me, and I felt so alone, and hurt.
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Ambo123 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 4:59 pm
Ambo123 BRONZE, Hillsboro, Oregon
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Two musicians playing together, there is nothing more beautiful.<br /> -John Frusicante

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Thanks :)

I sure can!

Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 1:28 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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It was good:) Could you comment on my work?