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Life with you

May 26, 2010
By Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
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Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
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"Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying"- Lil Wayne

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Even when you left you were in my heart. And when i said it was over i didn't believe it. Without you part of me dies, a huge part. Life is only perfect when your in it. You may not believe it but i love you. Even if our friendship isn't the same as before at least it's something. As long as your around things will be better it's true. Cuz you make me so happy i could sing. When we met i knew you'd always be apart of me. And over this year i found out i was right. It makes me feel like your my soul mate, it makes me happy. I love you all the time even during the fights. I'll fight to make sure i'll never lose you. Cuz if i lost you i'd lose my heart too.

© Kelly A., Niscayuna, NY

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Ventus PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:24 am
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying&quot;- Lil Wayne

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By the way anyoone who see's this and likes wat i write. Expect more. I'm gonna post something tonight or tomorrow morning.
Ventus PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:24 pm
Ventus PLATINUM, Bolingbrook, Illinois
33 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Only once the drugs are dying. That i feel like dying&quot;- Lil Wayne

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THanks its just somethin i wanted to express :)
ReineBloodwolf GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 1:40 pm
ReineBloodwolf GOLD, Portsmouth, Virginia
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&quot;I will never fade away&quot; &quot;I will always be with you&quot; &quot;Yours in eternity&quot; &quot;Live for today but, look foward to tomorrow, and never forget to smile&quot;

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oh my how beautiful