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December 7, 2010
By Whisperheart BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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&quot;Cause for a moment a band of thieves in ripped up jeans got to rule the world...&quot;~Taylor Swift<br /> &quot;The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams&quot; ~Eleanor Roosevelt

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It surrounds us all in these modern times
In our world many are breathing their last breath
Some innocent, some paying for their crimes
The quest in life is to overcome death
Religious people put their faith in God
The rest do not believe something awaits
Some fear the end, hiding behind facades
Our sum of time is left up to the Fates
There is no key to immortality
But there is no reason to fear this strife
Death can be the final fatality
But not the final episode of life
We all have to reach our life’s December
Perhaps to defeat death we remember

© Steve S., Marblehead, MA

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Whisperheart BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 5:09 pm
Whisperheart BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Cause for a moment a band of thieves in ripped up jeans got to rule the world...&quot;~Taylor Swift<br /> &quot;The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams&quot; ~Eleanor Roosevelt

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Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment. It means a lot to me. This is a first draft so I need to work on it some. Thank you for the critique. :)
Ellawind PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 8:05 pm
Ellawind PLATINUM, Seattle, Washington
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What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger.<br /> <br /> Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.<br /> <br /> Dream like you will live forever, live like you will die today.

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It's interesting... In a good way. I think the only wording I'd change is maybe 'sum'- try and find a synonym for that, maybe? It made me think, which is good. I also really like the thing about 'Life's December.' I feel like it could be cliched but it's not... I like it! Great work.