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The Way You Make Me Feel

December 30, 2010
By Tawny GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
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&quot;We are never really happy until we try to brighten the lives of others&quot; ~Helen Keller<br /> &quot;Look to the sunshine and you cannot see a shadow&quot; ~Helen Keller

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Day and night, you wander my mind with no halt.
Being with you leaves a long lasting smile on my face.
I cannot control my joyous feelings; You're just so amazing- it's not my fault!
You're the only one I really notice in this loud and crowded place.
Never will you understand how much you truly mean to me.
Only you could ever make me feel this extraordinary way.
To my hidden away and usually lonely heart, you have found the key.
I wish it could last forever when together we lay.
They say we're too young, but I know this feeling must be true;
I feel like Rapunzel; always locked away inside myself until to my rescue you came.
The feeling I get when you're around is magnificent as the deep ocean blue;
I melt every time you look into my eyes or sweetly say my name.
I always hope this is the way you feel too;
With all my heart, I will forever love you.

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