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I Still Love You

April 5, 2012
By Erin326 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Erin326 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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The silence isn&#039;t so bad<br /> &#039;Till I look at my hands and feel sad<br /> &#039;Cause the spaces between my fingers<br /> Are right where yours fit perfectly.....

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I can never stop thinking about you
With your big brown eyes so deep, like doorways
I gave you my heart and without a clue
I dropped everything down all in one day
You trusted me with your soul and your heart
But we knew it wouldn't last a long time
For I had to be pulled out of the dark
My folks wouldn't allow you to be mine
We started too fast, too strong, too insane
Connecting on a dark time in our past
But now we are independent again
Our lives blurring closely, but never last
I wish for you to look past what I killed
And to know that I love you so much still

© Michelle B., Blairsville, GA

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KayZ-doodle20 GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 at 9:44 am
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This is SO gorgeous. Such a deep detailed description, beautiful. Emotional. Relatable. Pulling. I absolutely love this, and it flows and rhymes gorgeously.