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May 8, 2012
By unknown_dreamer BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
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unknown_dreamer BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
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I want to be remembered as the girl who always smiled,the one who could brighten up your day, even if she couldn't brighten her own.<3

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You asked.
I nodded with answer.
Wishing of words to say.
You walked away...
me ;no response.


You complemented.
I nodded with a smile.
Furiously agitated with my life.
You stared into my eyes...
me;no response.


You followed me home pouring questions.
I nodded in confusion.
Wanting to run away.
You looked down ...
me; no response.


You asked away.
I answered on a paper.
" Yes.(: "
You kissed my lips ...
Finally, something we both understand.

© Heather J., Slidell, LA

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unknown_dreamer BRONZE said...
on May. 11 2012 at 6:14 am
unknown_dreamer BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
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I want to be remembered as the girl who always smiled,the one who could brighten up your day, even if she couldn&#039;t brighten her own.&lt;3

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ha, thanks so much !(:
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2012 at 10:16 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Stay Strong! &lt;3

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I like it dreamer!;) Very ..hmm what's the word ..oh I know.. AMAZING!
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2012 at 10:16 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Stay Strong! &lt;3

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I like it dreamer!;) Very ..hmm what's the word ..oh I know.. AMAZING!
AnnaX PLATINUM said...
on May. 10 2012 at 9:29 pm
AnnaX PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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&ldquo;I write only because there is a voice within me that will not be still.&rdquo;

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Hi, I like this a lot! It is relatable. Great job.
unknown_dreamer BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2012 at 7:42 pm
unknown_dreamer BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
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I want to be remembered as the girl who always smiled,the one who could brighten up your day, even if she couldn&#039;t brighten her own.&lt;3

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thanks so much !(:
DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 10 2012 at 7:16 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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Hey, that was awesome. I liked your Second Person Sentence Begining.. Great Job!! (:
unknown_dreamer BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2012 at 6:53 pm
unknown_dreamer BRONZE, Ottawa, Other
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I want to be remembered as the girl who always smiled,the one who could brighten up your day, even if she couldn&#039;t brighten her own.&lt;3

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I actually just thought of it.(:

Just because someone can't speak, dosen't mean they can't be with someone that can(:

madlinejoy SILVER said...
on May. 10 2012 at 6:35 pm
madlinejoy SILVER, Deale, Maryland
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let go and let God<br /> &quot;Love is not an emotion but a choice&quot;

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wondering is this from personal experince are you unable to speek or is it a stroke of genius that hit your brain ether way makes for a great story keep writting