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August 13, 2013
By maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
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let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

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There is pain flowing through me
It's been here for so long
There is pain flowing through me
Always singing a song

There is pain flowing through me
It refuses to hide
There is pain flowing through me
It puts an ache in my side

The pain is taking over me
It's going to swallow me whole
The pain is taking over me
And Its starting to take a tole 

The pain is taking over me
Never letting me have peace 
The pain is taking over me
Why, why won't it cease 

The pain is locked inside me
The key is buried far to deep 
The pain is locked inside me
always continuing to seep

The pain is locked inside me 
It won't go away 
The pain is locked inside me
And I think it's here to stay

© Nick C., Boca Raton, FL

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midnightwoah said...
on Sep. 6 2013 at 7:26 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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"We accept the love we think we deserve." -Stephen Chbosky

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I like the repition that you used. It was very easy to see through and i wish there was more!  
maelstrom14 GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2013 at 1:53 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
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Thank you shade :) i kinda ment to do that but it is repetitive and the ideas are a little repetitive i like doing different stuff :) i apreciate the feedbacks
Shade3043 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 20 2013 at 1:49 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

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I liked it! It has great imagery, a rhythm that works, and emotion coursing through it! :D The only complaint is that it's repetitive. A mistake I admittedly make a lot. :p Still, great poem! 4/5.