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Dream

February 18, 2015
By Nick.Dudek BRONZE, Highland Village, Texas
Nick.Dudek BRONZE, Highland Village, Texas
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I ascend into my dream,
A loud yell and scream,
The people all surround,
I listen to the sound,
I’m scared beyond belief,
I cannot get relief,
I cannot bear the pain,
The tears pour down like rain.
I am living, I am dead,
But only I’m dreaming, of what’s in my head.



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on Feb. 20 2015 at 11:49 pm
Gabbyyirene GOLD, Winter Garden, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
You have every right to a beautiful life- Selena Gomez

This is incredibly beautiful because it is so short and to the point. Also I admire the way you took what your feeling inside and put it to good use. This is a very powerful piece and you should be very proud of yourself.

on Feb. 20 2015 at 1:49 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

So beautiful and poetic! It's rather short yet it carries a strong meaning. I love it ^_^ Keep it up you have a great talent. I already 5 starred it Thank you for sharing this.

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on Feb. 20 2015 at 3:09 am
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I did not fail 101 times, but I simply found 101 ways that did not work.&quot; -Thomas Edison

Awesome job! Great rhyme and rhythm! You deserve having it be on top voted articles! Congrats!