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You and I
Summary:
A girl (unnamed) has been friends with her best guy friend for what seems like forever. They've shared everything with one another. But then the times come when it seems that she and her best guy friend end up caring for one another as more than just friends, yet when one feels that way, the other doesn't, or the other doesn't know about the feelings. However, this time the girl is longing for him to really like her. Will it be a fairytale ending?
Anindita C.
You and I
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Please keep reading if i post more. Thank you so much for commenting. Very much appreciated!
yay im glad this story appealed to you. yeah and i'm a strong believer that the ending is the most important piece of the book.
thanks so much!
i will def take your advice regarding the phone call. looking back at it, i see what you mean. so thank you!
nicee. i found the metaphors especially interesting and well-placed.
one thing though. in the dialogue with the phone conversation. you might want to add some description as to how they're both feeling. i know it's a phone conversation and all, but you could still put something like "i could feel my palms starting to get clammy" haha that was cheesy. but you get the idea. create atmosphere.
and also, make sure it's clear on who says what. i got a bit lost sometimes because there wasn't much clarification on on that in the dialogues.
awesome job!! and keep writing :D
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