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Remember Me

October 28, 2009
By krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.<br /> *krysten*


I remember you, do you remember me?
you wanted out, so I set you free.
It broke my heart, it cut me deep, now I understand,
I truly fell in love with you, but you wouldnt be my man.
I was a cutter, you were too, we helped eachother stop,
there was no pain, no more suffering, we were on the top.
You showed me how to keep straight on this winding road,
held me and kept me close in the dark and cold.
I fell in love so easy with you, I had no trouble,
every day I talked to you our love began to double.
Your words helped me when I was falling down,
sometimes you didnt catch me and I hit the ground.
I knew we started drifting, I knew it in my heart,
there was nothing I could say to fix it, I had done my part.
Your wonderful laugh and voice echo in my head,
it makes me smile, makes me scream, I want to be dead.
I dont know why you left me, I may not ever know,
I let my heart hide my love, never let it show.
My feelings, they are locked away hidden from the world,
love is like walking on an inch thick cord.
We were the greatest of friends, together forever,
but now that its over, I cant ever do it again, never.
My heart is locked away inside my chest, never love again,
my time is running shart, my blood is running thin.
This is the end of my story,
now do you remember me?



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krysten SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 6:37 pm
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.<br /> *krysten*

Thanks so much! That means alot!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 10:17 am
BiancaMarie SILVER, Colchester, Vermont
5 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
better loved then lost then never to have loved at all

awww.! i love it.! and i can really relate.! great job sweety.! your a great poet.! :D

rating=5 (:


krysten SILVER said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 5:15 pm
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.<br /> *krysten*

Awesome. Thanks

on Nov. 23 2009 at 11:54 pm
Kayira1991 GOLD, Dhaka, Other
15 articles 181 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have miles to go before I sleep<br /> If there is a will, there is a way<br /> Nothing is impossible

I don't know if it is available online. But I have the song in my pc. If I find any link online, I will let you know.

krysten SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 6:32 pm
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.<br /> *krysten*

Thank you. All of my poems are about things that i've gone through. Where can I find this song? I would love to listen to it.

on Nov. 23 2009 at 1:41 am
Kayira1991 GOLD, Dhaka, Other
15 articles 181 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have miles to go before I sleep<br /> If there is a will, there is a way<br /> Nothing is impossible

That's a lovely poem. It reminds of me a song of Rabindranath Tagore. Its a lovely romantic Bengali song. I like it very much and your poem reminds me of my favorite song, so....................................