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Birthday Candles

December 28, 2011
By marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

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The three decker cake stood before me on the table
All thirteen candles lit and waiting,

The wax melting and fading,
And the base plunged into the goodness of vanilla icing

As the spotlight birthday song continued to be sung.
Once it’s over, the candles seem to get brighter,

Smiles seem to get wider,
And the balloons seem to get lighter

As I stare at the round, sugary cake.
I can feel everybody’s eyes on me,
Beckoning my wish to come and blow out the candles,

So that the mocking cake can be devoured.
I can’t think of my wish or how to put it in words;
I feel pressured with all the family’s and camera’s eyes

Poised on me with expectance.
The icing covered cake sweats on the table,

And within seconds I make up my mind
I take a deep breath and blow 12 flaming candles out

And on the 13th I whisper softly,
'I blew out my birthday candles

And wished for you.'

© Meghan T., Scottsdale, AZ

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Dedication:





To Noah,
I will always be wishing for you.
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Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 18 2012 at 4:37 pm
Wired_To_Inspire PLATINUM, Coopersburg, Pennsylvania
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This is so good, and if I were you, I'd send it to a more elete group of workers.
didyou_notice_007 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2012 at 4:35 pm
didyou_notice_007 BRONZE, Wasilla, Alaska
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That was so nice!! I read it to my friend and I thought it was going to be just another normal poem but it wasn't and I liked it a lot!! I read it and then I read your 'Author Comment' and well I have no words for it! I loved it!!(:
Xilaphilaskra BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2012 at 4:11 pm
Xilaphilaskra BRONZE, Ypsilanti, Michigan
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Amazing i love the last stanza!
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 13 2012 at 3:45 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

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Thanks so much!! =)
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 13 2012 at 3:44 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

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Thank you! =) and sure! I will asap! :)
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 3:24 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

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thank you! =)
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 3:24 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

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Thanks so much for your perspective--i never really thought of my poem that way! =) ;P
C.K.Snow SILVER said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 3:05 pm
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What a lovely article! I love the last lines the best!
zadiekatie23 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 3:03 pm
zadiekatie23 PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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This really demonstrates the pressures of life and how the simplest things can be escape. Thanks! :)
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 2:28 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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thanks! =)
AgentOrange789 GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 10:51 pm
AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
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Very good! I like how it was all built up for the very last line. I would appreciate if you read my poem "Revelation of Infinity." Thanks.
TheRoadNotTaken said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 8:41 pm
This was amazing! i love how its kind of like a story too! i thought it would be just a little poem about birthday candles ( even though it kind of is!) But it was really great!
hanna.fofanna BRONZE said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 6:19 pm
hanna.fofanna BRONZE, Wasilla, Alaska
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This was great:) Well done!
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 5:15 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

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Thank you! =) and oh....lol never really realized that, hehe...whoops...
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 4:33 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Lovely work, the descriptions are wonderful, the occasional rhyme is great. The only issue I seem to see is that you tend to switch verb tenses, otherwise great
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 4:21 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

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*of not on
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 4:20 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

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&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

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**Please note: because of the new changes to the website as on 2/6/12, my poem's formatting is screwed up.
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 6:05 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

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thank you :)
Xrisi BRONZE said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 6:04 pm
Xrisi BRONZE, Wichta Falls, Texas
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ohh i like it
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:29 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

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thank you so much! :D