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Artificial Evolution

April 22, 2010
By Metallicajunkie DIAMOND, Hartfield, Virginia
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Metallicajunkie DIAMOND, Hartfield, Virginia
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They’ve shoved lies down my throat,
trying to make me believe.
They want me to hear them gloat,
but approaches the Revolution’s Eve.
Not aware of what they have created,
a beast they have made out of me.
All their life they have been hated,
only trying to get me to agree.
I will take back my pride,
and justice will be redeemed.
No longer must I hide,
and I will destroy everything they have dreamed.
This artificial evolution was unsuccessful,
because I have become just too stressful.

The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was developing my decision to openly delcare my pride of being an Atheist. Christians kept constantly pushing me and trying to "convert" me, but I refused to listen to their beliefs. Today I am more respectful to Christianity, but I have the same level of tolerance for their attempts to "convert" me despite my many declarations of Atheism. If you are a Christian I apologize if I offend you, but I am merely expressing my frustration and intolerance.
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