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Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



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on May. 31 2010 at 11:08 pm
chocolatesummerlaughterbliss SILVER, Seattle, Washington
7 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
the moving finger writes, and having writ
moves on; not all your piety and wit
can bring it back to cancel half a line
nor all your tears wash out a word of it

the "moon and sun" thing was crazy original, love the story, please turn it into a book someday!

on May. 30 2010 at 1:26 pm
ashbadash BRONZE, Ocala, Florida
4 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Friends are like glue, they always stick by your side.

I luveeeedddd it soooo much but I do agree with Zikky and BookOwl, he didn't seem that surprised when she told him she was a tracker, but it was overall awesome. I'd give it an A+++++!!!!

on May. 30 2010 at 8:34 am
LaughingGirl GOLD, Ocala, Florida
13 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Play the music not the instrument. -Author Unknown

Ohh...this story is good. But I agree with Zikky about screaming stalker because you would think the kid would be freaked out. The target is very calm. Very good, though. Write more please!

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on May. 29 2010 at 2:49 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

Love it... but that girl is creepin me out. Surprised that dude didn't scream STALKER ..... just kidding

on May. 28 2010 at 10:38 pm
moonshoescarly SILVER, Fontana, California
5 articles 2 photos 8 comments
I liked this, it could have been great if it had more build-up. It's too bad that this website doesn't allow longer articles!

polkadot0418 said...
on May. 27 2010 at 5:24 pm
This story is very imaginative. I love it! Keep on writing; I'm waiting!

on May. 26 2010 at 8:44 am
chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
10 articles 1 photo 62 comments
i love this story. it's one of my favorites on this site. the end of it kind of surprised me, though. i did like it until the end, though. great job and keep writing!

on May. 25 2010 at 12:52 pm
ZombieDanceWithMe SILVER, Rockford, Illinois
7 articles 1 photo 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
“To die is nothing; but it is terrible not to live”



-Victor Hugo

I dont really think the story was that good. It was a little to in your face with a quick ending. you also didn't really leave much mystery in it. I think you could have a nice writing talent, but i cant see that through this story. keep writing though!

 

but remember. mystery can sometimes be the best thing for short stories.


on May. 25 2010 at 9:15 am
itsdariannnn BRONZE, Pensacola Fl, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your journey starts with your first step

umm ok i say stop giving so many hints and facts in this chapter or whatever. u explain everything and leave nothing to mystery. its great but i feel like i know everything now. it would have been better to not say it so much! "ima tracker""target" just stop explaining and leave room for question

plantrock said...
on May. 24 2010 at 10:23 pm
plantrock, Roscoe, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments
I really like this story. I resent any of the people who deject this story simply because it is about witches. I think you have a wonderful imagination and a very fluid, concise writing style.

on May. 24 2010 at 12:33 pm
sundaelover116 BRONZE, Ann Arbor, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind" ~Dr. Suess

great story!!! really pulled me in

on May. 23 2010 at 1:45 pm
VanishingEntity, Keller, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reality continues to ruin my life.

-Bill Watterson

Oh, come on people! If she wants to write about witches, let her! If it's not your type of writing, then fine. Just enjoy her amazing abilities and bask in the warmth of her wonderful writing! Picky, picky, picky...

on May. 22 2010 at 7:35 pm
cyanidesun BRONZE, Atascadero, California
1 article 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is the eye of ignorance that assigns a fixed and unchangeable color to every object; beware of this stumbling block. -Paul Gauguin

I loved it. Although, I somewhat agree with the other posters that the boy's bluntness was a bit of a turn-off I still really enjoyed it and didn't mind the end in which she doesn't give him a choice to leave. I adore your writing style, and if I picked this up in a bookstore I would definitely buy it, hands down. Great job.

Eilatan GOLD said...
on May. 22 2010 at 2:23 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

this is a very special piece

Alonzo234 said...
on May. 20 2010 at 6:33 pm
Alonzo234, Boston, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
In the first couple of paragraphs it sounded very intense

on May. 19 2010 at 8:20 pm
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

What is yours called?  Mine is called The Beholder- it is my first Teenink submission!

on May. 19 2010 at 2:03 pm
evrycloudyday7 PLATINUM, Wappingers Falls, New York
28 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what counts." Seneca
"I'll just read a book instead. I don't care if we're just friends. I can hang out with myself I'm old enough now to pretend. Bam ba dum ba dum ba dum." kate n

sure! love to.

on May. 19 2010 at 10:54 am
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

Me too!  I'll look for your work on the site- please check mine out!

on May. 19 2010 at 10:53 am
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

I'd like to see your work- will you check mine out?  No one's really seen it yet.

on May. 19 2010 at 10:51 am
AelitaReloaded PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The pen is mightier than the sword" author unknown (to me)

It takes about 2 weeks.