Opulence | Teen Ink

Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 896 comments.


on Apr. 24 2010 at 4:29 am
GymClassHero BRONZE, Canberra, Other
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
A half-done defiance will lead to unbeatable rebellion.

I thought it was pretty good :D

I just think that the story moved too fast.....people keep saying that to my stories.

Can you read mine?

TeenInk.com/fiction/all/article/197489/Gothic-Tales/


on Apr. 24 2010 at 12:39 am
Sir-William BRONZE, 111111, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A certain degree of neurosis is of inestimable value as a drive, especially to a psychologist." - Sigmund Freud

Very interesting idea, however I felt that you told me too much. Maybe if you added a few scenes where we see his relationship wiht his father, and not just telling us. I think that would make it even better! But very interesting idea.

on Apr. 22 2010 at 9:13 am
Denali.B. BRONZE, Calgary, Other
2 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Knowledge is knowing that a tomato is a fruit, wisdom is knowing that you don't put it in a fruit salad." - Unknown Source

Oh i loved it, i really like how you write and how it turned around where the Target was watching her too

AquaGem SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 9:00 pm
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.

Thank you for your support! :-)

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 3:14 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

[Gasps happily] Yay! I'll check them out right now! Thanks

AquaGem SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 10:43 pm
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.

Thanks for the support! I'll try to read your work ASAP.

AquaGem SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 10:42 pm
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.

I have two other Opulence short stories on here as well as a poem and unrelated short story.

AquaGem SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 10:39 pm
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.

Brittany W.- Thank you! Are you wondering if there will be another short story? If so then there are two Opulence short stories on here. If you are wondering if there will be a sequel after I've written this novel then yes I plan on writing another book at least in the same world.

Melissa A.- I enjoy sci-fi and fantasy mainly but am willing to read just about anything.


Lorelei SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 6:31 pm
Lorelei SILVER, Newport News, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is ever easy"- Zeddicus Zul Zorander, copied by Richard Rahl

Do you like sci-fi, or just anything good because i'm writing a sci-fi and i would like your opinion when it's done

Lorelei SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 6:24 pm
Lorelei SILVER, Newport News, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is ever easy"- Zeddicus Zul Zorander, copied by Richard Rahl

This is really good. I love this kind of story, magic in the real world. Keep writing!

on Apr. 20 2010 at 3:43 pm
BlondeOnBlonde ., Kissimmee, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
wow will there be a sequel? i hope so this is good. you show promise. if you ever finish it maybe i can read it over and give it to my moms whos a publisher for random house.

Cuore GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 4:19 pm
Cuore GOLD, Saint Augustine, Florida
12 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the change you wish to see- Ghandi

Everything in this room is eatable, even I'm eatable, but that my dears is called cannibalism and is highly frowned upon in most societies.- Willy Wonka

Bright lights often blind those who can't see. ~

Cool!!! That's a really awesome story. You should make it into a book.

on Apr. 18 2010 at 3:19 pm
MorrighanPoe SILVER, Crystal, Minnesota
6 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Of course you are...I understand perfectly [that you're in love with me], because I'm in love with myself.The fact that I'm not transfixed in front of the nearest mirror takes a great deal of self-control." -Lestat de Lioncourt

Thanks! I have definitive plans to :)

Ims1213 said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 1:38 pm
I agree, however, it is obvious you (without a doubt) have a talent! Keep writing :)

on Apr. 17 2010 at 9:22 am
horse95lover BRONZE, New York, New York
4 articles 9 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read" - Groucho Marx

so good!! i love your writing. write more!

on Apr. 16 2010 at 8:08 pm
SerraAngel GOLD, Buchanan, Michigan
12 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we have nothing to fear but fear itself".

PLZ read Eternal Night: Chapter 1 and COMMENT its under the 'All Fiction' Catagory. And read 1st and 2nd comments to figure out where Chapters 2-7 are.

Adum74 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 11:14 am
Adum74 BRONZE, Sandy Hook, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Big Books Little Time

Life is What you make it!

Wow this is amazing and I want to read more it has captivated me with this one page!

on Apr. 14 2010 at 7:04 pm
vampiresrock GOLD, Cornish, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you oranges, make grape juice and sit back and let the world wounder how the hell you just did that.

nnnniiiiiiiiiiiccceeee!!!!!!!

on Apr. 11 2010 at 11:21 am
MorrighanPoe SILVER, Crystal, Minnesota
6 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Of course you are...I understand perfectly [that you're in love with me], because I'm in love with myself.The fact that I'm not transfixed in front of the nearest mirror takes a great deal of self-control." -Lestat de Lioncourt

It seems a bit abrupt. Her just suddenly telling him she's a witch? I would ease into it a bit more, but, in general, really good :) keep writing

on Apr. 10 2010 at 7:09 pm
LLaisney17 BRONZE, Northport, New York
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"the question isn't what your country can do for you its what you can do for your country"

Wow this is  really amazing.  you should write more to it.