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Remembering
May 24, 2009
The Sun smiles and tells a story
that no one has heard before,
but it doesn't have to be hidden,
or forgotten anymore.
The sea, wind and sky
were together as a whole.
The mountains, plains and deserts
were all part of the same soul.
The fire, rain and snow
came with all their power.
The lightning and the thunder
became frozen before the hour.
The trees, bushes and grasses
All held their mighty stance.
The birds, flies and fishes
were all given the chance.
But the Earth was meant to change,
so the Sun had to too.
And she forgot all she'd seen
And all she had been through.
But when the wind blows just right,
and when the waves calm in the sea,
The Sun remembers the beauty
and she shares her memory.
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This article has 97 comments.
Elizabeth-Martin PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 7:37 pm
wow, that was so amazing! i loved it so much! and thankyou for commenting on my poem "Don't Anymore". =)
VampiericRain GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 4:02 pm
Wow. I really like how you had every other line rhyming. I stink at it.
Hey!! I'm sorry It took so long to comment.
This Is my FAVORITE poem out of the ones you have written already.
Keep writing!!!
I just wanted to say that I am so thankful that you commented on My Poem.
It ment alot to me because your the only one who has to far and you had such nice things to say.
so thank you.
=)
This Is my FAVORITE poem out of the ones you have written already.
Keep writing!!!
I just wanted to say that I am so thankful that you commented on My Poem.
It ment alot to me because your the only one who has to far and you had such nice things to say.
so thank you.
=)
vickilovesu0227 SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 11:43 am
This poem is amazing. You have so much talent. Stick with it!
lovebegins PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 5:02 pm
this really good and i enjoyed itt you have a talent at writing stick to it.
munkyman95 GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 8:33 am
very nicee liked the rhyme and rhythm, and personification of sun was really intresting :)
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 7:33 pm
I love this!!
Angelalala said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 2:11 pm
I really really like this. It reminds of mythology type stuff. Nicely done :-]
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 6:58 pm
Thanx for commenting on my poem:) Your comments are always so pleasant n nice to read:) Your poems are great too;)
hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 5:33 pm
Woah I love this you're very talented
Luminosa said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 3:00 pm
I absolutely adore it! I've never read the elements personified all at once before. Lovely, keep writing. P.S Thank you for my feedback on 'Caged' as well =]
MarilynMonroe BRONZE said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:57 pm
This is really good! It seemed to me very fable-ish like the stories of how the opossum go tits tale or why the spider spins its web. Thank you also for what you said about one of my poems!
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Favorite Quote:
“Art is a human activity whose purpose is the transmission of the highest and best feelings to which men have attained.”
The rhyme "power" with "hour" is phenomenal. Due to the nature of the slant rhyme, it sped up the pace, increased the suspense.
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