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Remembering
May 24, 2009
The Sun smiles and tells a story
that no one has heard before,
but it doesn't have to be hidden,
or forgotten anymore.
The sea, wind and sky
were together as a whole.
The mountains, plains and deserts
were all part of the same soul.
The fire, rain and snow
came with all their power.
The lightning and the thunder
became frozen before the hour.
The trees, bushes and grasses
All held their mighty stance.
The birds, flies and fishes
were all given the chance.
But the Earth was meant to change,
so the Sun had to too.
And she forgot all she'd seen
And all she had been through.
But when the wind blows just right,
and when the waves calm in the sea,
The Sun remembers the beauty
and she shares her memory.
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Pink_Butterfly said...
on Aug. 17 2009 at 1:44 am
Very Nice.
Lostinbooks said...
on Aug. 17 2009 at 12:33 am
Wow I totally agree with Zero_Kiryu on this one! It sounds like it belongs in a song- very vivid with smooth rhythm. Nice work!
Electricity PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 16 2009 at 11:35 pm
This is deep... I love your writing! You seem to have talent, and you should portray it more on teenink. You seem to be very, very popular! Great job, I'd love more!
cutietothemax58 SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2009 at 2:08 am
hey Thanks for commenting my poem Affliction. You're a pretty good writer yourself. Your poetry flows nicely and you have such a good use of imagery. Great job.
mandygale77 said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 3:25 pm
That was really beautiful, I loved the end. Great poem! :)
Joanna said...
on Aug. 13 2009 at 10:58 pm
I just wanted to thank-you for commenting on my work. It means so much to me.
I really like this poem. Nature is just so beautiful and delicate, yet so tenacious. (Tenacious is a good word :D) I think you captured this perfectly in your poem. Wonderfully done, my friend.
I really like this poem. Nature is just so beautiful and delicate, yet so tenacious. (Tenacious is a good word :D) I think you captured this perfectly in your poem. Wonderfully done, my friend.
katiemiladie GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2009 at 3:11 am
Thank you so much for your amazingly sweet comments on my stories! I am honored that you asked me to read some of your material! This poem is amazing and clean cut. It's stunning. If you want some more private comments and collaboration from me just leave another comment on one of my stories and I can give you my email adress. Thanks again!
Madison Craypo SILVER said...
on Aug. 8 2009 at 2:05 am
WOW. That was... shocking. The words just painted the picture so clearly in my mind. You have talent! :D
MorningStar15 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 8 2009 at 2:03 am
WOW IT AWESOME <3
I love this poem. It's lyrical almost, like in those fantasies like The Lord of the Rings. I can imagine Thorrin Oakenshield singing this song. Thanks for all your comments. I like the idea of giving people 'space' to imagine, I never thought of it that way before. I love your writing.
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amyxu said...
on Aug. 7 2009 at 7:05 pm
This is a dazzling work of art. I love the way you choose a meter and a rhyme scheme and stick with it. That's becoming a lost art nowadays. I also like the figurative and lyrical wording. Nice job :)
Lucy Scanlon BRONZE said...
on Aug. 7 2009 at 5:07 pm
This is really a great poem. I loved it. Thank you for the feedback on my poem "Dream".
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