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Remembering
May 24, 2009
The Sun smiles and tells a story
that no one has heard before,
but it doesn't have to be hidden,
or forgotten anymore.
The sea, wind and sky
were together as a whole.
The mountains, plains and deserts
were all part of the same soul.
The fire, rain and snow
came with all their power.
The lightning and the thunder
became frozen before the hour.
The trees, bushes and grasses
All held their mighty stance.
The birds, flies and fishes
were all given the chance.
But the Earth was meant to change,
so the Sun had to too.
And she forgot all she'd seen
And all she had been through.
But when the wind blows just right,
and when the waves calm in the sea,
The Sun remembers the beauty
and she shares her memory.
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RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE said...
on Aug. 7 2009 at 3:34 am
Thanks for commenting on my Dream Girl's Prayer. I really like this poem. It's beautiful and magical. If something that I read or watch enchants me, which what yours did, that is a VERY good sign. I loved it. It's beautiful, graceful, peaceful, beautiful, and you have a talent for poetry.
SmileyRiley PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2009 at 8:54 pm
i really love it! its unique and different from anything ive ever read! great job and thanks for the comment!
pinksage33 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 10:27 pm
I love the flow of this!!! keep up the good work.
bookhugger14 SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 9:33 pm
oh and ps - please feel free to comment on my poetry too! i would love such an expert poet's opinion! thank you! ;)
bookhugger14 SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 9:32 pm
omg this is AHmazing! please keep writing poetry! the rhyming scheme was excellent and the figurative language... wOw! good work :)
KaylaMariebabie SILVER said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 7:47 pm
this was awesome =)
Schubster said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 4:24 pm
this was my favorite work of yours. Awesome job!
distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 3:41 pm
Seems like a lot of people have commented, but I just want to say that that was such a great poem! You really have a talent for writing poems!!! Keep wiritng, you'll probally be famous some day!! 5 stars!
despurlock DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 4:29 am
Wow! I love the way this poem flows, you did such a great job on the uniformity of the syllables and the rhyme scheme was perfect. My favorite part are the last two lines. Your personification is impeccable, this is REALLY a great piece! Keep it up! And thanks so much for the comment on "Love, Your Big Sis" I hope you will come check out some of my other work. Thanks again, and wonderful job!
ultrabookworm BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 4:23 am
I really love this poem!! Though the rhyming style is classic, your subject and the way the words work together is so original. Thanks for commenting on my poem "Regrets," by the way ;).
FlamableFyre DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 4 2009 at 11:00 pm
Absolutely beautiful. I loved it, it was fantastic. hey it's wildheart, and you commented on one of my poems. thanks, and i'm serious this is a work of art. i wish sooooooo much that i'd thought of it. it's amazing!!!!!! :):):):)
Dream-Junkie SILVER said...
on Aug. 4 2009 at 10:31 pm
This has be the greatest thing I've read in a long time. If definitely wins itself a spot in the book of greatest poems
jay_jayy:D GOLD said...
on Aug. 4 2009 at 5:39 pm
This is a beautiful poem. It makes me think about all the pretty places I've seen, and the way you've described it all is magical. Keep writing and thank you for the comment on my work :D
xlacrossex22 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2009 at 4:58 am
Wow. This poem is great. The second stanza is definately my favorite. I really enjoyed reading this piece, and hope that you write more like it in the future. By the way, thanks for the feedback on "My People". You are truly an amazing writer yourself.
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