Daddy's Womb | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Daddy's Womb

Daddy's Womb MAG

April 23, 2008
By Anonymous

i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.

So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.

i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.

The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.

i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.

i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.

© Anonymous

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
The Top
By imperfection GOLD
Gilroy, California
imperfection GOLD, Gilroy, California
17 articles 9 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dream as though you&#039;ll live forever, live as though you&#039;ll die today.&quot;<br /> ~James Dean (1931-1955), American Motion Picture Actor, symbol of rebellion

View profile
Poetry
I hate splash water on the lack of there-forth
By Anonymous
Poetry
Solar Lies
By Rachel Bellah BRONZE
Seattle, Washington
Rachel Bellah BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment
View profile
Poetry
Perfectly
By Christina Rudolph BRONZE
Lilburn, Georgia
Christina Rudolph BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Voice
By BreLee SILVER
Sula, Montana
BreLee SILVER, Sula, Montana
7 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
unnamed
By Mew13 SILVER
Princeton, New Jersey
Mew13 SILVER, Princeton, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If there were to be a universal sound depicting peace, I would surly vote for the purr.&quot;<br /> (Barbara L. Diamond)

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2183 comments.

bigpapa said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 10:00 am
This is AMAZING!!!!!!! keep up the good poems!!!
joshow said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 9:57 am
this is a great poem
LaReSt said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 10:05 am
I have but it is a religious one. I am wating to see my work get published here. Hopefully it will be soon.
allie.vgr1994 SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 7:57 am
allie.vgr1994 SILVER, Manton, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People die...so love them everyday,<br /> Beauty fades...so look before it&#039;s gone,<br /> Love Changes...but not the love you give,<br /> And if you love, You will never be alone.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Every day is hard,<br /> Nobody knows how hard it is for me,<br /> every day is kewl tho.&quot;

View profile
I think it was one of the greatest things ever!!!!!! Have you writen anything like this?
allie.vgr1994 SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 7:55 am
allie.vgr1994 SILVER, Manton, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People die...so love them everyday,<br /> Beauty fades...so look before it&#039;s gone,<br /> Love Changes...but not the love you give,<br /> And if you love, You will never be alone.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Every day is hard,<br /> Nobody knows how hard it is for me,<br /> every day is kewl tho.&quot;

View profile
Yeah it was great I would agree!♥!♥!♥!♥!♥!♥
allie.vgr1994 SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 7:53 am
allie.vgr1994 SILVER, Manton, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People die...so love them everyday,<br /> Beauty fades...so look before it&#039;s gone,<br /> Love Changes...but not the love you give,<br /> And if you love, You will never be alone.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Every day is hard,<br /> Nobody knows how hard it is for me,<br /> every day is kewl tho.&quot;

View profile
It was really good!!!!!! I really love people who express their feelings in that way!♥!♥!♥!♥!♥!♥!♥!♥
ToyRe GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:58 am
ToyRe GOLD, Monterey, California
12 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;This too shall pass.&quot; and &quot; When God leads to a cliff, jump, because He&#039;ll either catch you or teach you how to fly.&quot;

View profile
It's saying how a parent can tell you you can do anything and/or be anything but in the end they are the ones who try to hold you back be it for a reason like they aren't ready for you to go or selfish reasons.
ToyRe GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:56 am
ToyRe GOLD, Monterey, California
12 articles 3 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;This too shall pass.&quot; and &quot; When God leads to a cliff, jump, because He&#039;ll either catch you or teach you how to fly.&quot;

View profile
This is one of the best poems I have read. Good Job!!!
chrissmd SILVER said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:40 pm
chrissmd SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you find yourself in love with a person who does not love you, be gentle with yourself. There is nothing wrong with you. Love just didn&#039;t choose to rest in the other person&#039;s heart.&quot;

View profile
this is so good... i love the symbolism you used. great job!
justbreathe.... BRONZE said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 4:35 pm
justbreathe.... BRONZE, N/a, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how bad things get, there is always something that you don\&#039;t know about just yet.

View profile
I really like it. And apparently so does everyone else. 473??!! Keep up the good work!
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 4:25 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

View profile
lol, it's ok. Imagery is good
adam17 said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 11:45 am
adam17, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
hi

View profile
i dont get it
CHEERLEADER~4~life BRONZE said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:03 am
CHEERLEADER~4~life BRONZE, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments
View profile
i really liked your poem...keep up the good work!!!!

:D
peace.frog.271 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 8:47 pm
peace.frog.271 BRONZE, Pinehurst, North Carolina
3 articles 2 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Let us remember as we chase our dreams into the stars that our first responsibility is to our Earth, to our children, to ourselves.&quot; -George W. Bush <br /> <br /> This means to me that before we let ourselves fade, we must take care of ourselves and others.

View profile
er... imaginary, or imagery? sorry, I have a sick case of OCD.. hehe
Wayne92 GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 9:08 am
Wayne92 GOLD, Beaumont, Texas
10 articles 0 photos 5 comments
View profile
Your poem was very visual the picture of a boy wanting to go beyond grounds but at the end you was bound heck ima be able to write like this amazing keep it up
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 7:51 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

View profile
I really love this, cool. It flows together good and the imaginary is awesome! :)
Ralin said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 4:28 pm
Ralin, Columbus, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;We must listen before we can learn.<br /> We must learn before we can prepare.<br /> We must prepare before we can serve.<br /> We must serve before we can lead.&rdquo;

View profile
i thought that your piece is beautifully put together. i love the way you let your thoughts out on paper... or online lol like i do. u should try to enter in on a contest
liblib33 GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 8:28 pm
liblib33 GOLD, Dedham, Massachusetts
18 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life sucks then you die-- yeah I should be so lucky.<br /> --Jacob &quot;Breaking Dawn&quot;

View profile
I could only wish to write something like this. Great job!!!!
crisscross BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 7:18 pm
crisscross BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
3 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;There is a pleasure in the pathless woods,<br /> There is a rapture on the lonely shore,<br /> There is society, where none intrudes,<br /> By the deep sea, and music in its roar:<br /> I love not man the less, but Nature more.&quot;<br /> ~lord byron

View profile
its amazing your deep concept on life the grasp you have on it the view you see your poem in i dont know but in my minds eye as i read i saw a embodied adult ready to flee ready to become successful ready to be one on his own but as our ties to our parents emotional most causes us to linger around a bit.
IBRAVO BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 5:33 pm
IBRAVO BRONZE, Mcallen, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments
View profile
I think drowning is a metaphor for all the things a father cautions his son about... if the steps too deep, he will be enslaved by the water, but at the same time the father becomes hypocrite about it when he takes out the chain to enslave his son and prevent him from flying away (metaphor for being an overprotective father)