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Daddy's Womb MAG
April 23, 2008
i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.
So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.
i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.
The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.
i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.
i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.
© Anonymous
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smartchick118 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2011 at 8:27 pm
I totally agree with what you said ^^^... i think thts this is an amazing poem :))
CallofDoodie BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 9:13 am
really deep bro, i like it
Jones said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 10:04 am
I love this! So many words...so beautifully put....For this sort of poem I might say it was cramped by the extensive vocabulary, but I can tell that was the point of the poem. The words really make it come alive. Wow...just stunning.
blackflame SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2011 at 3:16 pm
that is real good............keep going
Arshia1595 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2010 at 12:04 am
Ohh..Guess im gonna have to wait a while. Thanks a ton, though
TH3innovator BRONZE said...
on Dec. 27 2010 at 1:00 pm
It took me around 2-3 months for a reply
Arshia1595 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 27 2010 at 1:51 am
Wow..this is really good..hope you keep on writing.. Btw can someone help me..how much time does it usually take to get the editors approval for the online post of your work?
dummpoetrylover said...
on Dec. 26 2010 at 11:02 pm
your poem is very inspirational and caring...and it deepens my soul to think about how father hood is so important to this world.i love that every verse rymed and you used no conciets<3luv ya
Elle66 said...
on Dec. 22 2010 at 11:25 am
This was so lovely. i was pulled in as soon as i saw the title. Keep on writing cause your great! :)
bambibelle said...
on Dec. 22 2010 at 12:28 am
this is truly touching, thank you
beangurl:) said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 5:48 pm
wow that was beautiful i loved it
vestling92 SILVER said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 1:03 pm
powerful ending. well done.
WildandFree GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 12:04 pm
Parents don't ever wanna let go and this poem says that perfectly
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