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April 23, 2008
By Anonymous

i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.

So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.

i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.

The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.

i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.

i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.

© Anonymous

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Eilatan GOLD said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 11:35 am
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I don't want to be mean, but I don't see what the big deal is about this poem. The rhymes are kind of forced, and the idea isn't completed. I'm sorry, but this just isn't the best poem out there. I've read poems that really deserve to be on the poetry page for months and months. but this isn't one of them.
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2010 at 1:32 pm
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OMB!!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF MY NEW FAVS!!! i dont know how u wrote sumthing this beautiful. its absolutely magnificent
banna42 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 9:02 pm
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this was good:] i couldn't really understand what you were getting at, but i liked it:] good structure!! keep it up:]
Jellybean9898 PLATINUM said...
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i really liked this, very meaninful.  keep up the good work.
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That was pretty good.., I liked it alot,
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wow this is great . I really like the concept of it . Job well done :) . If you have a chance would you care to check out my work ? It would mean so much
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on Jun. 28 2010 at 3:05 pm
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Dude, that was great
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on Jun. 19 2010 at 11:23 am
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that is what i thoght.
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on Jun. 17 2010 at 12:41 pm
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I like this poem cause it reminds me of my dad.I think when he said chain it means a chain that protects him and his dad was holding the chain to make his son try smthng new but to be safe.
Hannaleiigh PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 9:45 am
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I thought this was sad, but inspiring. I often feel held back by my obligations, and my family, too. I wish it was easier to loosen those ties from teenage life into adulthood, but it seems as if it is the same as pulling off a bandaid. We must either be harsh, or not do it at all.
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on Jun. 9 2010 at 11:17 pm
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I thought is was very inspering to people who have not left there house or has done any thing fun like that
TheGoldenDomination SILVER said...
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That was really good! I really liked it :)
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I liked the poem, and i agree w/ _Elsy_
_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 3:23 pm
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um. and you are? and i'm was just tyring to get people to stop talking about those two lines (look at comments below mine) so please take the chill pill you just gave me
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 3:20 pm
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Exactly. AbbyQ is right guys.
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 3:18 pm
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UHHH, you seem to tell everyone to chill, but I think i'ts time that you should. Everyone has an opinion and its just a poem. You have no right to judge other people's lives ok? Im just sayin.
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 2:58 pm
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Thats great critical thinking...I agree.
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 2:56 pm
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......hehe
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 2:55 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
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The poem was BEAUTIFUL!!! You have to admit.
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 2:54 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
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*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

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Wow, that could go on to a great debate..anyway, you both have good points. Personally, I liked the poem because I understood why the dad had the kid on a "chain". It was because he loved his son and wasn't ready to let him "fly" . Yet I sitll agree with what you said sarah.